Well, I’m not sure how it happened, but I am now halfway through the first draft of a novel I didn’t intend to write. This book didn’t exist last month even as a possibility, so I began writing it with absolutely no outline.
I may have a working title.
It is set in the world of Neveyah, so I do have an Excel workbook containing basic maps and a style sheet for word-usage. I know the ecology and the kind of society the protagonists live in well. Thankfully, the world is solidly built. I keep the Neveyah Excel workbook/style guide open while I am writing and regularly add new usages and made-up words.
I am also updating the general map as I go along.
The way this came about was this: On Nov 1, day one of NaNoWriMo 2020, I sat down and began pounding out the ending for Bleakbourne on Heath. I had outlined it well, so writing the final chapters took far less time than I planned for, only two days.
On day four, I immediately plunged into my other work-in-progress, writing my antagonist’s story, just as I had planned. That went amazingly well for a day, and I made serious headway on his character arc.
On day five, it occurred to me that I knew nothing about the tainted artifacts. Yet, these relics are significant traps for the protagonists.
That raised a question. Where did the mage-traps originally come from, and who had the dark magic and skills to make them? On the day of the Sundering of the Worlds, the universe intervened. Tauron, the Bull God, was barred from physically entering the World of Neveyah.
So, they must have been created before the Sundering. At the time of Daryk’s story, a thousand years have passed since the Sundering. What dark properties allowed this artifact to conceal itself for a millennium? Where did Kegan get the relic, this mage-trap, that he used to ensnare Daryk?
I always start my backstory in a separate document, so I began telling myself the story.
The next thing I knew, I was writing a novel detailing the path of the tainted artifact.
Now, I am so focused on this that I can hardly think of anything else. I was like this for Huw the Bard and Tower of Bones.
I know I’m nuts, but I have now written over 50,000 words on that story alone, and (fingers crossed) this first draft should be concluded by the end of the month. Whether or not I ever take it beyond first draft to publication is another question. Still, I’m having fun with it, and the exercise is serving its purpose.
Writing this backstory has several functions. First, I am writing the outline as I go, and keeping the ultimate goal in mind gives me a finite point to write to. When I pause to plan my next steps, I can look at this book’s page in my workbook and see the story arc to that point. I will then decide what has to happen to get the protagonists to their next obstacle.
This has been a productive world-building exercise. In this time, the world is beginning to recover from the catastrophic war of the gods. The ecosystem is rebounding, and as life becomes easier, values are changing. The original fifty tribes are starting to go apart, to form distinct cultures.
Society is splintering—a small number of tribes are leaving their roots behind, becoming tribeless. During this time of transition, these tribeless citadels have shifted to a more commerce-driven economy. There are positives on both sides of this, and for both emerging cultures, resistance to change is pointless.
As I write, I am discovering how the artifact manipulates its owners. In writing this historical piece, I find things popping up that need to be noted on my other work-in-progress outline. Because of that, I am making good headway on fleshing out the outline of Daryk’s side of the story.
Writing this backstory helps me understand the negative changes to his personality and makes them logical. Regardless of whether I ever choose to publish this little fun-run, I’m having a great time writing it.
To me, that is what NaNoWriMo is all about—writing something that has been simmering in the back of your mind and having the best time of your life doing it.
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2 responses to “Mid #NaNoWriMo Update: Best Laid Plans Gone Awry #amwriting”
Lol, this is how I write most of my novels!
And why would you NOT publish it? It sounds like a fascinating story, and you have all the skills to knock it into decent shape after it’s done, so I can’t think of a good reason not to capitalise on all that work.
Side and origin stories like this are one of the best things about having the freedom of not answering to a trad publisher – I have several lined up for my Five Kingdoms world, with more simmering in the background once I have the climax book to this cycle out in the world.
Go for it!
And congrats on so ‘winning’ so early on in NaNo month.
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Aw, thank you for the kind words, and especially for the support!
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