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#NovemberWriter: When Inspiration Fails #writing

We are now well into week one of November. Week one of a thirty-day writing challenge is the danger week. Once the first rush of creativity passes, many writers will give up. They experience a momentary lull in creativity and don’t have the tools to visualize what to write next.

Olympia Rebel Writers Sticker 2024The well of inspiration runs dry and they quit. Many will never attempt to write again, although they will always consider themselves secretly a writer.

Rather than worrying about word count, I suggest setting a more reasonable goal. If you are new at this, I suggest a goal of writing at least one paragraph a day. Write something each day for thirty days, and you will be surprised at what you produce.

I have solutions for overcoming the roadblocks that daily life throws up. And believe me, when you are caregiver for a spouse with late-stage Parkinson’s, life tends to vomit roadblocks.

PostItNotePadThe first one is one I developed when working in corporate America. Frequently, my best ideas came to me while I was at my job. If your employment isn’t a work-from-home job, using the note-taking app on your cellphone to take notes during business hours will be frowned upon. To work around that, keep a pocket-sized notebook and pen to write those ideas down as they come to you.

It’s old-school, but it worked because you don’t appear distracted or off-task.

Ideas come to me when I stop forcing my brain to work when it’s on its last legs. Strangely, cleaning and organizing my living space allows my mind to rest. Taking the time to wash dishes or clean the house helps reset my short-circuited creative mind.

But getting outside and walking helps even more. I suggest taking a notebook or dictating into your note-taking app.

Sometimes, we write an action scene that doesn’t advance a story. Arcs of action drive plots. Every reader knows this, and every writer tries to incorporate that knowledge into their work.

But some scenes don’t advance a story because they are examples of random mind wandering.

Don’t throw it out. Keep it and maybe you can use it in a different story. ALL writing is good for you, so set what doesn’t work for your current work aside. Keep on mind wandering and writing scenes.

Who knows what will grow from those seeds?

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I go somewhere quiet and ask myself questions about the story I’m stalled on. I carry a notebook and make a list of the answers. I write an idea here and another there, and soon I have a plot.

Novels begin a certain way: at the story’s outset, we find our protagonist and see them in their familiar surroundings. The inciting incident occurs once we have met them.

But maybe we don’t have any idea what sort of bad thing happens. Maybe we’re still doing character creation, and that is okay.

If you’re stuck, it sometimes helps to go back to the beginning and consider the following questions:

  • What is the goal/objective? What do they want?
  • Is that objective important enough to warrant risking everything to acquire it?
  • What could the protagonist face that will challenge their moral values and sense of personal honor?
  • How could this force the protagonist to become stronger?
  • Who is the antagonist? What do they want, and what are they willing to do to achieve it?
  • Does the enemy face ethical quandaries, too?

Wrong-Way-Traffic-Sign-K-101-1Every obstacle we throw in the path to happiness for the protagonists and their opposition shapes the narrative’s direction and alters the characters’ personal growth arcs. As you clarify why the protagonist must struggle to achieve their goal, the words will come.

I write my ideas down and the broad outline of a story evolves.

  • I keep my notes in an Excel workbook. It contains maps, calendars, and everything pertaining to any novel set in that world, keeping it in one easy-to-find place.
  • When logic forces change to the plot, and it always does, I go to my storyboard and update my plot outline, calendar, or maps.

When your creative mind needs to rest, step away from the keyboard and do something different. I find that when I take a break to cook or clean out a corner, ideas for what to do next in my novel will occur to me. These little flashes of inspiration carry me a few chapters further into the story.

dead catFinally, let’s talk about murder as a way to kickstart your inspiration. Some people recommend it but I suggest you don’t resort to suddenly killing off characters just to get your mind working. You may need that character later, so plan your deaths accordingly.

  • Readers become angry with authors who casually kill off characters they have grown to like.

When a particular death is planned from the beginning, it is one thing. But developing characters is a lot of work. If you kill off someone with an important role, who or what will you replace them with?

Above all, relax. It’s November, a good month for writing. Write something every day, even if it is only a paragraph that has no relationship to anything else. The goal is to develop the habit of writing every day.

Perhaps you should write a haiku:

November writers

Inking worlds on paper.

Leaves fall, writers write.

Whatever you come up with, it will have to be better than that travesty!

To learn about the haiku and perhaps write one of your own, check out this website. It’s fun and it’s free! Haiku Checker – Check Haiku syllable and line counts!

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#NovemberWriter: Preparing to speed-date your muse #preptober #writing

November is National Novel Writing Month—and I am and always will be a November Writer. It’s the month I dedicate to writing new material. However, I no longer participate in the organization known as NaNoWriMo.

MyWritingLife2021I was a dedicated municipal liaison for the Olympia, Washington Region for twelve years and a regular financial donor, but I walked away after the organization’s implosion last November. I will get my 50,000 new words in November but will not sign up to participate through the NaNoWriMo website.

Instead, my region is preparing to go rogue with our own creative contest, milestones, and rewards. We stay connected through our Facebook page and our Discord Channel.

Last year’s tomfoolery within the national organization’s headquarters included accusations of ignoring child endangerment and grooming in a particular forum, rumors of mismanaged donations (never substantiated), and the overt power grab and subsequent “cleansing of MLs” by NaNo HQ’s new regime. Those shenanigans have poisoned the waters for me.

This Lit Hub article was the capper—I’m walking away from what was once the best part of my writing life. NaNoWriMo defends writing with AI and pisses off the whole internet. ‹ Literary Hub (lithub.com)

Whether you choose to go the NaNoWriMo route and participate through their website or go rogue like me, October is #Preptober, and the world is full of writing challenges to participate in.

Olympia Rebel Writers Sticker 2024Set your goal, keep a record of your daily word count or pages edited, or whatever, and let National Novel Writing Month be your month to achieve your goals. I have had buttons and stickers made as rewards for our region’s writers, and we will have write-ins as we have always done.

We are committed to supporting all writers, whether they are traditionalists participating through the national website or rogue writers, and the community we have built over the last twelve years remains strong. More than ever, we are committed to our original goals of writing a novel (or completing a project) in 30 days.

National Novel Writing Month is about accountability. We set goals and devote thirty days to working toward certain milestones. Each milestone we achieve gets us closer to a finished project. On November 30th, we can look back and take pride in what we have accomplished in only thirty days.

So, what is #Preptober all about? It’s getting ready to spend 30 days writing new words, self-editing last year’s novel, or any number of creative projects.

During the month of November, before my husband’s Parkinson’s became a problem, I might pound out 60,000 or so words, but my novels were only half finished at that point. Maybe a year or so later, I would have a coherent first draft that tops out at around 120,000 words. Three more years and six or eight drafts later, my novel was publishable at about 90,000 words.

For me, succeeding at getting the bare bones of a novel’s first draft written during the 30 days of November requires a pre-flight checklist. The checklist becomes my permanent stylesheet/outline for that novel.

I found Excel useful when I first began writing, and I use it to this day to keep my plots and background information organized. I also use Excel to keep track of my daily word count. This was my personal April challenge–unfortunately my husband was hospitalized before the end of the challenge, so my word count ends before April 30th:

Word count spreadsheet

Google Docs, pencil and paper—ANY document or spreadsheet program will work.

Once I’m done winging it through the story and am in revisions, some scenes will make more sense when placed in a different order than originally planned. At that point, an outline allows me to view the story’s arc from a distance. The outline is a visual aid that keeps my stream-of-consciousness writing flowing.

If I am editing a story for a client who has no outline, I make one as I go.

The outline is an editing tool, an overview that allows me to see where the plot arc might be flatlining. Perhaps an event should be cut entirely as it no longer works. (I always save my outtakes in a separate file for later use.)

Over the next few weeks, we’ll talk more about my process.

But first, WHAT is our project? Are we using November for writing or editing or writing music or painting landscapes?

This is how I start my pre-flight checklist for winging it through the merry month of November. Whether we are writing a novel or editing it, the basic premise of any story in any genre can be answered in eight questions. Considering these questions on a chapter-by-chapter level is a good editing tool—when you note your observations on the outline, you can see the rise and fall of the action, follow the character arcs, and ensure the pacing is on point.

  1. Who are the players?
  2. Who is the POV character?
  3. Where does the story open? This is worldbuilding, so make the setting feel real.
  4. What does the protagonist have to say about their story? What do they want, and what will they do to get it?
  5. Who is the antagonist? What do they want, and what will they do to achieve it?
  6. What is the major obstacle to our characters’ achieving their desires?
  7. What other roadblocks hinder them?
  8. How does the story end? Is there more than one way this could go?

Plot-exists-to-reveal-characterThe answer to question number one kickstarts the plot: who are the players? Once I know the answer to this question, I can write, and write, and write … although most of what I write at that point will be background info. The answers to the other questions will emerge as I write the background blather.

I write fantasy stories most often, and they always begin with the characters. Characters usually arrive in my imagination as new acquaintances inhabiting a specific environment. That world determines the genre.

Who are youThey share some of their story the way strangers on a long bus ride might. I see the surface image they present to the world, but they keep most of their secrets close and don’t reveal all the dirt. These mysteries will be pried from them over the course of writing the narrative’s first draft.

That little bit of mind-wandering gives me the jumping-off point, which is all I need to get my story off the ground.

Knowing who the protagonist is, having an idea of their story, and seeing them in their world is a good first step.

Write those thoughts down so you don’t lose them. Keep adding to that list as ideas about that world and those characters come to you.

But what if you plan to edit last year’s novel rather than write a new project? We will go into productive self-editing next week.

real-writers-writeAnd what if you are writing poems or short stories? Graphic novels? We will also go into preparing to “speed-date your muse” when embarking on those aspects of writing.

We will look at all areas of creativity this #Preptober, because November is a month for exploring creativity on every level, and many sites offering November writing quests are springing up. We will explore the ever-expanding list of NaNo alternatives, and we will be prepared to have fun.

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