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#NovelNovember – the quest has begun #writing

As many of you know, every November I set a writing quest goal for myself. Some years, it is to write the skeleton of an entire novel in 30 days. Other years, the goal might be to write a complete short story every day.

Caution I stop for Hallucinations © Connie J. Jasperson 2025This year, my goal is to write the skeleton of a novel that is the second half of a duology. I can’t publish the first book until the second book is finished, as I intend to publish the two halves of that story simultaneously.

Also, I need to source the proper cover art for a different book that is ready for the final stage of the publication process. I have found some good candidates, but none are exactly what I am looking for.

Writing 50,000 words in thirty days has never been a problem for me. I just sit down and let my fingers spew random stuff that sometimes turns into a usable novel, so getting a desired word count has never been a problem.

Unfortunately, meeting the goal of writing a complete story arc for a novel in only 30 days is, and always will be, a struggle. Thus, I work from an outline. That helps rein in the randomness.

Writing for at least an hour every day without fail for an entire month takes determination.

Meeting that goal builds discipline.

I do have some strategies I developed during my 12 years as a municipal liaison for the now-defunct organization, NaNoWriMo.

  • Set aside time to write every day, at least one hour.

If you need quiet time, make that hour inviolable, an hour during which you are NOT to be bothered unless an amputation has occurred or the house is on fire. When I was still working, I found that by rising an hour early, the kids were still sleeping and the house was quiet. I also wrote while everyone else was watching TV.

The most important thing about developing a writing process is to find one that works for you.

Give yourself permission to try different things until you find something that works.

  • Do you work best in short bursts?
  • Are you at your best when you have a long session of privacy and quiet time?
  • Or is your process something in the middle, a melding of the two?

What if my style changes? What if the way that worked last month no longer works?

Give yourself permission to change and find a way that works best for you. Be willing to be flexible.

I have my best ideas when I’m about to leave the house. That’s no joke. If that is a problem you also have, do as I do and write those thoughts down. I keep a notebook in my bag just for those moments.

You will be productive once you find your best style.

But first, you must give yourself permission to write.

  • Go to a coffee shop or the library to write. You might find the place packed with other writers!

My regional NaNoWriMo group had over 250 writers. Your region may have had that many or more. We have evolved into a more diverse group, one that is not focused on achieving word count in November. Your local region may have also reformed with a new direction.

As a group, we old hands are nurturing budding novelists, playwrights, poets, and songwriters. We hold in-person write-ins at coffee shops and also virtual write-ins via Zoom. New and aspiring writers in our area can find us through our Facebook group and also through our Discord channel.

  • Sit your backside down and write your ideas as they come into your head. Don’t delete and don’t cut anything just yet.

Don’t worry about story arc, or worldbuilding, or anything like that. Get the characters and the plot on paper. Once you begin writing those characters, their story and their world will take shape. You can worry about info dumps and issues like that later.

The exposition you put into your first draft is your brain doing the worldbuilding and character development that is necessary to take the story from the opening page to “the end.” You will trim back the exposition and expand on the important things after the first draft is finished and revisions have begun. Right now, you need the info your crafty mind is dumping into the story.

  • To be happy, we must have a balanced life.

Writers and other artists must make sacrifices for their craft. It’s just how things are.

But you don’t have to sacrifice your family for it. Sacrifice one hour of sleeping in, or something ephemeral and unimportant, like one hour of TV.

That is why I scheduled my writing time when I had to hold down a job. I had to cook and clean for my family and ferry them to their various after-school activities. They helped with the housework if I nagged long enough, but sometimes it was easier to admit defeat and do it myself.

I take comfort in the fact that they are raising their own teenagers now.

(Insert evil laugh here.)

Give yourself small rewards for every milestone, writing or otherwise. It might be a batch of cookies or an afternoon of binging on that show you love so much.

I’m a grandma now and living alone, as my spouse has late-stage Parkinson’s. He is being well cared for in an Adult Family Home, one staffed by wonderful people who are trained to care for patients who require that much assistance. I visit him every morning without fail, and I schedule everything, including my writing, around his needs.

Cartoon writer wondering "I am their creator. Why do they not listen to me?" 
I am their creator © Connie J. Jasperson 2025Nowadays, I have to force myself to do the ordinary household tasks (like laundry, my least favorite of all). My reward for doing that is an hour or two of reading or writing, whichever I am in the mood for.

However, for the month of November, my afternoons will be spent writing.

I will reward myself for achieving my writing goals. My self-indulgence is rewatching my favorite episodes of “The Brokenwood Mysteries.” Smart dialogue, wildly creative plots, great cast, and lovely New Zealand scenery.

Whatever your writing goals and however you choose to reward yourself, I hope you have a great and productive November.

If you are looking for something similar to the old NaNoWriMo (before it went off the rails) ProWriting Aid is running a Novel November quest, with a wordcount counter and plenty of ways to connect with other writers. I have signed up for this, just to see if it’s a good fit for me.

Go to What is Novel November? – ProWritingAid Help Center

 


Credits and Attributions:

Caution I stop for Hallucinations © Connie J. Jasperson 2025

I am their creator © Connie J. Jasperson 2025

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The end is nigh, but I’m clueless #amwriting

Tomorrow is the final day of NaNoWriMo 2023. I have just over 60,000 words written on my current novel. We’ve had some gloomy days here. Fog set in on Sunday, enveloping the world (at least the world I could see from my window); as I write this, it still hasn’t lifted. To enhance the gloomy ambiance, I play my favorite writing music,  Final Fantasy Guitar Collection, Vol. 2 | John Oeth – YouTube, and write dark scenes about shady people doing evil deeds.

MyWritingLife2021BWhen I can’t write anymore, I eat chocolate and read trashy romance novels about vampires.

I’m struggling to plot the end of this novel. If I know how the story will end, I can build a plot to that point. Over the years of editing and reviewing books, I’ve assembled a list of questions that help me nudge an idea loose.

Right now, one murder has been committed, and we now know who did it. Unfortunately, the outline from the midpoint on is a bit too concise:

“Karras follows Rahlie, murders him. Also attacks and robs Lorris, who survives. Lenn and Salyan hunt the killer. Fight, Lenn wounded, they prevail. Salyan kills Karras. Or maybe Lenn does.”

That’s it.

It isn’t a lot to go on.

Author-thoughtsI need to spend several days visualizing the goal, picturing each event, and mind-wandering on paper until I have concrete scenes. I need to write a few paragraphs that will become the final chapters.

I will write a synopsis of the final events as if I had witnessed them from the sidelines. It’s a good way to visualize what happened and will give me something to expand on over the final 25,000 words. I will have scenes firmly in mind and be able to write them from Lenn’s point of view.

So now, I’m outlining again, and it will become my synopsis. I have my character notes detailing what they wanted initially.

And, no matter their failings, our protagonist is endowed with an extraordinary power not granted to ordinary mortals: plot armor. They alone are allowed to survive all manner of grievous wounds and deadly encounters because they are needed for the plot to continue.

I ask myself several questions, and the answers show me at a glance how my characters have been changed by the events they have experienced.

  1. What do the characters want now?
  2. What will they have to sacrifice next?
  3. What stands in the way of their achieving the goal?
  4. Do they get what they initially wanted, or have their desires evolved away from that goal?

conflict thesaurusMy heroes and villains all see themselves as the stars and winners in this fantasy rumble. They intend to prevail at any cost. What is the final hurdle, and what will they lose in the process? Is the price physical suffering or emotional? Or both?

What happens when they catch up with Karras?

Sometimes, neither party knows what they will do once they achieve their goal, as they haven’t thought that far ahead. They (and I, as the author) have been completely focused on getting to this point in the story.

So here we are, just after the midpoint crisis. A serious incident occurred, launching the third act and setting my protagonists on the hunt. Now, something worse must occur that makes them fear they won’t achieve their objectives after all. My protagonists must get creative and work hard to accomplish their desired goal. They must overcome their own doubts and make themselves stronger.

I also need to insert several scenes showing what the enemy knows that the protagonists do not. I need to discover more about her motives and what she is capable of.

30 days 50000 wordsMy mental rambling is accomplishing something. My characters are all getting their acts together. They are finding ways to resolve the conflict and are ready to commence the fourth act, where they will embark on the final battle.

I know they will face off with weapons. I don’t know where that will happen, so that is something I need to work out.

By the end of the book, all the threads will have been drawn together and resolved for better or worse. The ending must be finite and wrap up the conflict.

Everyone goes home to their families and lives happily. In real life, people live happily, but no one really lives deliriously happily ever after.

That’s another story and a different genre.

Thank you all for listening to my mental ramblings—I hope they help you. Now, I can write a few paragraphs and give myself a skeleton to hang the story on with dots to connect and finish this first draft.

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Replenishing the Dry Well of Inspiration #amwriting

Week one of NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) is now behind us. I’m still zooming along and making good progress. However, this is where many writers will fall by the way. They can’t visualize what to write next and then lose momentum.

WritingCraftSeries_character-arcThe well of inspiration has gone dry.

Getting word count becomes too important for some of us, and we go a bit off the rails. We flail around and end up with bunny trails to nowhere.

There are ways to move the story ahead and still write something worth reading. And the story is what matters. The quest for word count is only a personal goal. National Novel Writing Month is not a race or a contest. It is a time dedicated to the act of writing.

I spent many years working in corporate America and often had my best ideas while at my job. If your employment isn’t a work-from-home job, using the note-taking app on your cellphone to take notes during business hours will be frowned upon. To work around that, I suggest keeping a pocket-sized notebook and pen to write those ideas down as they come to you.

That is an old-school solution that worked for me. The best part is that you don’t appear distracted or off-task.

Ideas come to me when I stop forcing my brain to work when it’s on its last legs. Trust me, pounding out 1,667 new words a day severely tests your creativity and endurance.

Strangely, cleaning and organizing my living space allows my mind to rest. Taking the time to wash dishes or clean the house helps reset my short-circuited creative mind. But getting outside and walking helps even more. I suggest taking a notebook or dictating into your note-taking app.

8ce052b8e7c8182a51dc4999859c1061Arcs of action drive plots. Every reader knows this, and every writer tries to incorporate that knowledge into their work. Unfortunately, when I’m tired, random, disconnected events that have no value will seem like good ideas.

  • But action inserted for shock value can derail what might have been a good plot.

I avoid acting on unplanned stupidity by brainstorming in a separate document and outlining as I go. This method helps me keep the overall logic in mind.

So, where are we in the story arc when the first lull in creativity occurs? At the story’s outset, we find our protagonist and see them in their familiar surroundings. The inciting incident occurs once we have met them, whether they are ready for it or not. At that point, we must take them to the next stumbling block. But what is that hurdle and how do they leap it?

Answering that question isn’t always easy and this is where some writers give up.

I’m writing a fantasy, and I know what must happen next in the novel because it’s an origin story. I’m writing it from a historical view. I know how this tale ends, so I am writing the motivations that lead to that ending.

Sometimes, it helps to write the last chapter first – in other words, start with the ending. That is how my first NaNoWriMo novel in 2010 began. I was able to pound out 68,000 words in 30 days because I had great characters, and I was desperate to uncover how they got to that place in their lives.

Lucky Coffee CupAs you clarify why the protagonist must struggle to achieve their goal, the words will come.

  • How does the protagonist react to pressure from the antagonist?
  • Why does the enemy have the upper hand?
  • How does the struggle affect the relationships between the protagonist and their cohorts/romantic interests?
  • What complications arise from a lack of information?
  • How will the characters acquire that necessary information?

As I write, a broad outline of my intended story arc evolves. I keep my notes in an Excel workbook. It contains maps, calendars, and everything pertaining to any novel set in that world, keeping it in one easy-to-find place.

When logic forces change to the plot (as it always does), I go to my storyboard and update my plot outline, calendar, or maps.

If you are stuck, it sometimes helps to go back to the beginning and consider these questions:

  • What is the goal/objective?
  • Is the objective compelling enough to warrant risking everything to acquire it?
  • What will the protagonist face to challenge their moral values and sense of personal honor? How will this force them to be stronger?
  • Who is the antagonist? What do they want, and what are they willing to do to achieve it? Are they facing ethical quandaries, too?

Every obstacle we throw in the path to happiness for the protagonists and their opposition forces change.  They shape the narrative’s direction and the characters’ personal arcs.

When your creative mind needs a rest, step away from the keyboard and do something else for a while. I find that when I take a break to cook or clean out a corner, ideas for what to do next in my novel will occur to me. These little flashes of inspiration carry me a few chapters further into the story.

Excalibur London_Film_Museum_ via Wikipedia

Excalibur London_Film_Museum_ via Wikipedia

Finally, let’s talk about murder as a way to kickstart your inspiration.

I suggest you don’t resort to suddenly killing off characters just to get your mind working. Readers become angry with authors who casually kill off characters they have grown to like.

When a particular death is planned from the beginning, it is one thing. But developing characters is a lot of work. If you kill off someone with an important role, who or what will you replace them with?

You may need that character later, so plan your deaths accordingly.

Whether you are participating in NaNoWriMo or not, may the words flow freely for you, and may you never run out of new ideas to write.

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Food as set dressing #worldbuilding #amwriting

We’re well into NaNoWriMo, and writing is going well so far. I’m on track, and the words are flowing well. At our Saturday write-in, one of my fellow writers asked me how I introduce food into a narrative. As you might imagine, I have an opinion about that: I see food as set dressing, a part of world-building.

MyWritingLife2021BFood scenes serve as transitions between events. The act of dining occurs, but the conversations are the point of that scene. This is an opportunity to rest and regroup.

I write books set in fantasy environments, but you create a world no matter what genre you write in. As that world grows on paper, so does the culture. An aspect of worldbuilding involves including the casual mention of appropriate food for your ecology and level of technology.

I feel it’s best to concentrate on the conversations when writing about meals. The food should be part of the scenery. The conversations around food are where new information can be exchanged, things we need to know to move the story forward.

Apples 8-25-2013I’ve read many unforgettable fantasy books. One that shall go unnamed stands out, but not for a good reason. The author gave each kind of fruit, bird, or herd beast a different, usually unpronounceable, name in the language of her fantasy culture. She must have spent hours devising that hot mess of fantasy foods.

The characters were great and engaging, and the plot was engrossing. But the information about each and every kind of plant or vegetable was inserted into the narrative in long info dumps that ruined what could have been a great book for me.

As a reader, I think Tolkien got the food right when he created the Hobbit and the world of Middle Earth. He served common everyday food that his target audience was familiar with.

Food is an essential component of a culture but should be only briefly mentioned. Whether commonplace or exotic, it should be similar enough to known earthly foods to create an atmosphere a reader can easily visualize.

As many of you know, I have been vegan since 2012. However, during the 1980s, my second ex-husband and I raised sheep as part of a family cooperative.

I could write a book about those five years, but no one would believe it—fantasy is easier to make sense of.

I grew up fishing with my father and have a first-person understanding of putting meat, fish, or fowl on the table when a supermarket is not an option.

That experience taught me many things. Meat, fish, and fowl won’t be served daily in the average person’s home if they must catch, kill, and prepare it for themselves.

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Village Scene with Well, Josse de Momper and Jan Brueghel II PD|100 via Wikimedia Commons.

It’s a lot of work to raise an animal. Hunting is also labor intensive. Then you have a lot of messy, smelly work to prepare it for cooking.

Travelers often streamline this process by skinning game birds rather than plucking them. The feathers come off with the skin – the whole point of hunting for dinner is to get it roasting as quickly as possible.

Why not raise animals and eat them? In the Middle Ages, pigs were raised solely for meat. The wool a sheep could produce in its lifetime was of far more value than the meat you might get by slaughtering it. For that reason, lamb was rarely served. The only sheep that made it to the table were usually rams culled from the herd.

Chickens were no different because you lose the many meals her eggs would have provided once a chicken is dead. Young roosters were culled before they got to the contentious stage and were usually the featured meat in the Sunday stew. Only one rooster was kept for breeding purposes. If he was too ill-tempered, he went into the stew pot, and a young rooster with better manners took his place.

Cattle and goats were also more valuable alive. Cows were integral to a family’s wealth as they were milk producers and sometimes worked as draft animals. Only one bull would be kept intact in a small herd for breeding purposes. The others would be neutered, made into oxen and draft animals that pulled plows, pulled wagons, fertilized the fields with their manure, and did all the work that heavy farm machinery does today.

In medieval times, it was a felony for commoners in Britain to hunt for game on many estates. Poachers were considered thieves and faced harsh penalties, horrific by our standards, if they were caught.

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Cucumbers waiting to be pickles © 2013 cjjasp

However, most people were allowed to fish as long as they didn’t take salmon, so hutch-raised rabbits, fish, or salted pork were on the menu more often than fowl, sheep, or cattle. Eels and frogs were abundant and were a menu staple in the average peasant’s home. Anything one could raise in a garden was carefully harvested and pickled or dried. Berries were dried or made into jams and wines, as were tree fruits. Fish were dried and smoked or salted, and even pickled. These preserves were critical to surviving winters.

Common vegetables in medieval European gardens were leeks, garlic, onions, turnips, rutabagas, cabbages, carrots, peas, beans, cauliflower, squashes, gourds, melons, parsnips, aubergines (eggplants)—the list goes on and on. But what about fruits?

Wikipedia says:

Fruit was popular and could be served fresh, dried, or preserved, and was a common ingredient in many cooked dishes. Since sugar and honey were both expensive, it was common to include many types of fruit in recipes that called for sweeteners of some sort. The fruits of choice in the south were lemons, citrons, bitter oranges (the sweet type was not introduced until several hundred years later), pomegranates, quinces, and grapes. Farther north, apples, pears, plums, and wild strawberries were more common. Figs and dates were eaten all over Europe but remained expensive imports in the north. [1]

Pies of all kinds were the fast food of the era, often sold by vendors on the street or in bakeries.

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Pieter Bruegel the Elder – Peasant Wedding (1526/1530–1569) via Wikimedia Commons

Wheat was rare and expensive. For that reason, the grains most often found in a European peasant’s home were barley, oats, and most importantly, rye. In the Americas, maize (corn)was the staple grain that provided flour for bread and was an essential ingredient in cooking.

Mostly, my characters eat fish, vegetables, grains, fruits, and nuts. The primary sources of protein are eggs, cheese, and fish. Herbal teas, ale, ciders, and mead are staples of the commoner’s diet. This is because drinking fresh, unboiled water can be unhealthy if your tale is set in a low-tech world. Medieval beers and ales were lower in alcohol but higher in nutrition than today’s brews. Ale or lager might be served at every meal, even to children.

pie and picklesIn my current work in progress, my people have a melding of familiar European and New World ingredients for their diet and do a lot of foraging. Fish, maize, and potatoes are essential staples, as are beans and wild greens. For a good list of what this diet might entail, visit this link: Indigenous cuisine of the Americas. You will be amazed at the variety of everyday foods that originated in the Americas.

Knowing what to feed your people keeps you from introducing jarring components into your narrative. But don’t make it the center of the scene unless your plot demands it. One of my favorite series does just that: Recipes for Love and Murder: A Tannie Maria Mystery (Tannie Maria Mystery, 1)


CREDITS AND ATTRIBUTIONS:

[1] Wikipedia contributors, “Medieval cuisine,” Wikipedia, The Free Encyclopedia, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Medieval_cuisine&oldid=896980025 (accessed Nov 4, 2023).

Apples and pickles courtesy of the author’s own kitchen garden.

Pieter Bruegel the Elder – Peasant Wedding (1526/1530–1569) PD|100 via Wikimedia Commons.

Village Scene with Well, Josse de Momper and Jan Brueghel II PD|100 via Wikimedia Commons.

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My Stressless #writinglife

So, today is the first day of November, and NaNoWriMo has begun. But November is also the month of cooking, my other hobby. And it’s also a month of doctor appointments – go figure.

MyWritingLife2021On Monday, I had to drive to Seattle to take the hubby for a consult with a neurosurgeon. Getting to the doctor was fine. It was a matter of spending one hour sitting in traffic trying to leave Olympia and another hour of actually rolling forward once we made it past the Nisqually River. I had planned ahead for that, so we were on time. The upshot is no back surgery for him unless there is no other option, as Parkinson’s patients do very poorly after surgeries.

Which explains his cognitive difficulties after the hip replacement. Surgery Complications for People with Parkinson’s | APDA (apdaparkinson.org)

However, the neurosurgeon explained some of the non-surgical options which may help. Surgery is a last resort, and hopefully, one we can avoid.

The trip home was easy once I found an entrance to the southbound lanes of I-5. I found all sorts of options to go north, but Olympia is 65 miles south of Seattle, so north was the wrong direction. I finally went north, passed a southbound onramp, exited, and doubled back to that street. An hour later, we were back in Olympia.

30 days 50000 wordsSo, what am I writing today? I’m working on the second half of a novel I began writing seven years ago, so all the world-building and character creation has happened. The plot for this half is evolving. I know the ending, and over the next thirty days, my characters will take me from this high point in the middle, through several hurdles yet to be determined, to that final victory.

I expect you’re wondering how a novel goes half-finished for seven years—I sometimes wonder too, but it happened, so there you go. During that time, I wrote a novel that is nearly ready to be published. I also reworked two existing novels into one and published it (Shadows of Redemption). Also, I finished my alternate Arthurian mashup, Bleakbourne on Heath, finally getting it published.

I can write quickly during NaNoWriMo, but revisions usually take several years.

My half-finished novel was set aside when I was stricken with the idea for my forthcoming book, The Ruins of Abeyon. If all goes well with the beta read and Irene’s final edit, Ruins will be out this summer.

Our new furniture has arrived, and we no longer live like college students. Dining on a card table and sitting in a folding saucer chair was fun for the first week or two, but it wore thin after four months. Hauling my 70-year-old self out of the chair meant for teenagers was not a pretty sight.

desk_via_microsoft_stickersI’m settling into the new office. In my old house, my ramshackle desk was in the Room of Shame, a jumbled mess of a storeroom. My new desk is not duct taped together and has the right amount of storage for what I need.

All in all, this office has the best ambiance of any room I’ve ever had. Writing is easy here, and I hope this novel will fly out of my head and be finished in about 55,000 words.

Unless I am suddenly stricken with a new novel.

(Saints forbid, because I think I’m really going to finish it this time.)

Our apartment has very little storage, so I am gradually unpacking. The shelves do their appointed tasks, and the extra storage is ideal. Even so, some of what I had thought we could keep will have to go.

office chairToday, the office/guestroom walls are barren, but I hope to have all the family pictures hung by the end of this week. The hide-a-bed sofa and side chair make a pleasant conversation area or guest room, whichever is needed. All I lack is my new desk chair, which is on its way here from Norway. (Yes, I splurged on a Stressless desk chair since I spend most of my time sitting in front of my computer.) It should be here in a week or two, and I can hardly wait as my current desk chair loses its appeal after an hour or so.

November is not just for writing here at Casa del Jasperson. My oldest daughter and her family will be with us for Thanksgiving this year, so a certain amount of food preparation will happen. And yes, the vegan will roast a turkey for her son-in-law, along with all the trimmings. Thanksgiving falls on Thursday, the 23rd, so my pre-cooking will be done over the course of that week. Anything that can be cooked in advance will be, and writing will happen as always.

food and drinkWhat are some of my planned treats? Cranberry and walnut shortbread, for one thing. Shortbread is so easy and affordable to make that it always surprises me when people don’t. I have veganized all of my old traditional recipes, so everyone can sneak a treat now and then.

November is one of my favorite months. I connect with the local writing scene, meet new authors, and make lots and lots of comfort foods. I feel incredibly fortunate to be at this place in my life. Happiness means something different for each person, but for me, it’s a comfy home with my husband, a good space for writing, and food with family and friends.

So, on this first day of NaNoWriMo 2023, may you find a little joy, and may your words flow freely!

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#NaNoPrep: write the novel first – worry about fine-tuning it later #amwriting

Over the next few months, authors embarking on their first NaNoWriMo will hear many rules about the craft of writing. Some will be good, and some will lead to later problems. I suggest you write the story as it falls out of your head during NaNoWriMo. Don’t worry too much about the rules until you get to the revision stage.

WritingCraft_NaNoPrep_101Getting those ideas out of your head now is what is important. The bloopers and grammar hiccups can all be ironed out in the second draft.

The common axioms of writing exist because writing a story that others can enjoy involves learning grammar rules, developing a broader vocabulary, developing characters, building worlds, etc.

However—some commonly repeated mantras of writing advice have the potential to backfire. An author with too rigid a view of these sayings will write lifeless prose, narratives an algorithm could produce.

The worst rules, in my opinion, are these three:

  • Remove all adverbs and adjectives. This advice is complete crap. Use common sense, and don’t use unnecessary modifiers.
  • Don’t use speech tags. What? Who said that, and why are there no speech tags in this nonsense?
  • Show, Don’t Tell. Don’t Ever Don’t do it! Oh, dear. What an amazing gymnastic routine your face is experiencing.

Nothing is more disgusting than a scene where a person’s facial expressions are described in minute detail.

My Coffee Cup © cjjasp 2013Yes, we do need to show moods, and some physical description is necessary. Lips stretch into smiles, and eyebrows draw together. Still, they are not autonomous and don’t operate independently of the character’s emotional state. The musculature of the face is only part of the signals that reveal the character’s interior emotions.

Another extreme is when the author leans too heavily on the internal, describing the stomach-churning, gut-wrenching shock and wide-eyed trembling of hands in such detail the reader feels queasy and puts the book in the trash.

Which reminds me—don’t forget the weak-kneed nausea.

For me, the most challenging part of revising a manuscript is balancing the visual indicators of emotion with the more profound internal clues. This is something that really only takes shape to my satisfaction through multiple drafts.

  • Write what you know, and don’t dare to write something you don’t. In other words, what they’re saying is don’t use your imagination.

True, you should be careful when writing a real-world ethnicity you don’t have a personal experience of. If your heart is set on that story and only that story, you might want to consult someone from that culture. 5 Tips for Avoiding Cultural Appropriation in Fiction | Proofed’s Writing Tips

But in fantasy, while our life experiences shape our writing, our imagination is the story’s fuel and source. J.R.R. Tolkien understood senseless conflicts and total warfare—because he had experienced it. His books detail his view of the utter devastation of war but are set in a fantasy environment and feature elves and orcs. (Those are two races that don’t abound in England, at least not that I’ve heard.)

Another unreservedly silly mantra is this one:

  • If you’re bored with your story, your reader will be too.

That’s NOT true. You have spent months immersed in that story, years even. You know it inside and out, but your reader doesn’t. Set it aside and come back to it a month or more later. You’ll fall in love with it again.

Commonly discussed writing proverbs go on and on.

  • Kill your darlings.

Indeed, we shouldn’t be married to our favorite prose or characters. Sometimes, we must cut a sentence, a paragraph, a chapter, or even a character we love because it no longer fits the story. But have a care – people read for pleasure and because they love good prose. If it works, keep it.

  • Cut all exposition.

The timing of when we insert the exposition into the narrative is crucial. A story must be about the characters, the conflict, and the resolution. The reader wants to know what the characters know. But they only need that knowledge when it becomes necessary for the plot to move forward. They don’t want information dumped on them.

8ce052b8e7c8182a51dc4999859c1061Bad advice is good advice taken to an extreme. But all writing advice has roots in truth. So, when it comes to making revisions, consider these suggestions:

  • Overuse of adverbs fluffs up the prose and ruins the taste of an author’s work. Don’t get too artful.
  • Too many speech tags, especially odd and bizarre ones, can stop the eye. When the characters snort, hiss, and exclaim their dialogue, I will put the book down and never pick it up again. My favorite authors seem to stick to common tags like said and replied. Those tags blend into the background.
  • Too much telling takes the adventure out of the reading experience. Too much showing is tedious and can be disgusting. It takes effort to find that happy medium, but writing is work.
  • Know what you are writing about. Research your subject and, if necessary, interview people in that profession. Readers often know more than you do about certain things.

Education doesn’t happen overnight. I’ve been studying the craft for over twenty years and always learn something new. Unless an author is fortunate enough to have a formal education in the subject, we must rely on the internet and handy self-help guides to learn the many nuances of the writing craft.

I buy books about the craft of writing modern, 21st-century genre fiction and rely on the advice offered by the literary giants of the past. I seek a rounded view of crafting prose and look for other tools that I can use to improve my writing. I think this makes me a better, more informed reader. (My ego speaking.)

chicago guide to grammarI recommend investing in a grammar book, depending on whether you use American or UK English. These books will answer your questions, and you won’t be in doubt about how to use the standard punctuation readers expect to see.

The Chicago Guide to Grammar, Usage, and Punctuation (if you use American English)

OR

The Oxford A – Z of Grammar and Punctuation (if you use UK English)

Both American and UK writers should invest in:

The Oxford Dictionary of Synonyms and Antonyms (UK and American English). This will increase your vocabulary and help you avoid repetition and leaning on crutch words.

There are many other books on the craft of writing, but a grammar guide and a dictionary of synonyms will take you a long way.

oxford_synonym_antonymI recommend checking out the NaNoWriMo Store, which offers several books to help you get started. The books available there have good advice for beginners, whether you participate in November’s writing rumble or want to write at your own pace.

Other books on craft that I own and recommend:

  1. Damn Fine Storyby Chuck Wendig
  2. Dialogue, by Robert McKee
  3. Steering the Craft: A Twenty-First-Century Guide to Sailing the Sea of Story, by Ursula K. Le Guin
  4. Story, by Robert McKee
  5. The Emotion Thesaurusby Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi, and I also have all the companion books in that series.
  6. The Writer’s Journey, by Christopher Vogler
  7. VERBALIZE by Damon Suede and its companion book, Activate.

they're their there cupI study the craft of writing because I love it, and I apply the proverbs and rules of advice gently. Whether my work is good or bad—I don’t know. But I write the stories I want to read, so I am writing for a niche audience of one: me.

Be brave. Write your novel during NaNoWriMo and worry about fine-tuning it later. That’s what revisions are all about.

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#NaNoPrep: worldbuilding – war elephants, magic, and the paranormal #amwriting

Today in our NaNo Prep series, we’re looking at magic and the paranormal, two phenomena which fall into worldbuilding. Many first-time novelists in my region intend to write a fantasy of one sort or another. This post might interest you even if you aren’t writing a fantasy, because logic is a fundamental aspect of a narrative’s structure.

WritingCraft_NaNoPrep_101Magic or the supernatural are core plot elements in most of my work. I see them as part of the world, the way the Alps were a core plot element in the story of the Carthaginian general, Hannibal‘s crossing the Alps with North African war elephants. The mountains were there, they were difficult to cross, and combined with his elephants, the Alps made Hannibal’s story a legend.

War elephants … what a concept; and yet, it’s a true story. Can you imagine how terrifying that must have been to people who’d never heard of such immense creatures as elephants? If you’re stumped for ideas, go to history. It’s far more fantastic than any fantasy I could imagine.

When I write fantasy, I take something that gives a person an edge (war elephants) and make it a double-edged sword (taking the battle to the enemy by crossing impassable mountains, costing half the general’s men and many elephants).

Hannibal_crossing_the_AlpsHannibal paid a heavy price for bringing his superweapons (elephants) to the battle. The ability to use magic should come at some cost, either physical or emotional. Or it should require coins or theft to acquire magic artifacts.

There should be consequences for abusing magic.

The boundaries an author places on magic, science, or superpowers are good obstacles to success. Overcoming barriers is what the story is all about.

As a freelance editor, I saw some poorly constructed fantasies. The problem wasn’t with the characters or the quest—it was the magic. The authors had no purpose for it other than “magic!” and had created no science to rein it in, making it too random and convenient.

I returned those manuscripts, explaining why I couldn’t take their money just yet. Magic should have limits, and it should come at a cost. When they resubmitted the manuscripts, they had resolved those issues. I was impressed with how their solutions to the magic problem made their character’s journey memorable.

I’m a dedicated reader and have inadvertently purchased a few fantasies that looked promising from the blurb and the first few “look inside” pages but which turned out to be thinly disguised Harry Potter knockoffs.

Let’s don’t do that.

magic wandIt’s fair to write stories where magic is learned through spells if one has an inherent gift, and it’s also fair to require a wand. That is how magic was always done in traditional fairy tales and J.K. Rowling took those worn-out tropes and made them new and wonderful.

Rowling portrayed her magic right. She made it a natural part of the world and established limits, ensuring that even Voldemort had weaknesses. Also, she made magic a science that required proper education, something the fairy tales never addressed. Sorcerers and sorceresses just appeared out of nowhere with magic wands and unlimited capabilities.

If you intend your characters to have magic or paranormal abilities, it must be treated like a science in that it obeys fundamental laws.

If you’re like me, those laws will come to you when the protagonist needs to know them. That will create the tension your narrative needs but you must write those laws down so you don’t contradict yourself later.

I strongly feel the same rules should apply to the paranormal. Yes, some things have become canon regarding how we imagine vampires, werewolves, witches, and ghosts. But we all want to read a new take on these old stories which is why the Twilight series was so wildly popular when they first came out. My daughters loved that series, but here’s a secret—I never read them. So, I can’t give you an opinion of the logic of her portrayal of the paranormal. But they were very popular, so whatever she did, it struck a chord.

Lucky Coffee CupI can suspend my disbelief when magic and supernatural abilities are only possible if certain conditions have been met. The best tales featuring characters with paranormal skills occur when the author creates a system that regulates what the characters can NOT do.

Some things to think about if your stories involve ghosts, shapeshifters, and other undead:

  • Those rules should define the conditions under which a supernatural ability works.
  • The same physics should explain why it won’t work if those conditions are not met.
  • The number of entities able to use it is restricted to only a small group.
  • The range (area) at which a skill or ability is effective should be limited.

I think it’s more believable when our characters are constrained to one or two special abilities.

Expertise in any field requires practice and dedication, working on the most minor details of technique. Magicians and wizards should develop skills and abilities through training and perseverance, as musicians do.

If your characters have paranormal abilities, how did they learn to use them? Was it trial and error, or did they have a mentor?

scienceA crucial reason for establishing the science of magic and the paranormal before randomly casting spells or flinging fire is this: the use of these gifts impacts the wielder’s companions and influences the direction of the plot, creating tension.

What if our protagonist is unable to fully use their abilities? What is the cause of that disability?

How can they overcome this? How is their self-confidence affected by this inability? Do their companions also struggle to master their skills?

So, we know limitations can drive the plot. They make us work to resolve this problem.

The group will learn what has to happen before the hero can fully realize their abilities. They must be worried it won’t happen and they will fail. The companions must wonder if they have backed the wrong general, must have doubts. “How many soldiers and war elephants will we lose in conquering these mountains? Is the Golden McGuffin worth all this misery?”

People with nearly unlimited powers are gods, and while writing about gods is traditional in classical literature (and who doesn’t love Loki), we want to be original in our thinking. Give your gods a fatal flaw of some sort.

To wind up this rant: if you have decided to include gods, magic,crows-clip art clicker vector dot com or the paranormal in your NaNo novel, how can you take these common tropes in a new direction?

Write those ideas down now, while you’re thinking about it. I feel sure you will make your world different from the other fantasy worlds out there. The possibilities are endless.

The 2023 #NaNoPrep series to date:

  1. #NaNoPrep: creating the characters #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  2. #NaNoPrep: The initial setting #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  3. #NaNoPrep: What we think the story might be about #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  4. #NaNoPrep: The Heart of the Story #amwriting. | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  5. #NaNoPrep: Signing up and getting started 2023 #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  6. #NaNoPrep: How a strong theme will help you write that novel #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  7. #NaNoPrep: worldbuilding – society and how we live #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)

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Image: Hannibal Crossing the Alps, James Baldwin (editor and author) (1841-1925), Public domain, via Wikimedia Commons

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#NaNoPrep: worldbuilding – society and how we live #amwriting

November is only a week away. If you are participating in NaNoWriMo and intending to begin writing on November 1st, this post is meant to help you lay the groundwork for the world in which your novel is set. This is definitely pre-writing, but you might want to describe this world in a separate document.

WritingCraft_NaNoPrep_Novel_in_a_monthFirst, what sort of world is your real life set in? When you look out the window, what do you see? Close your eyes and picture the place where you are at this moment. With your eyes still closed, tell me what it’s like. If you can describe the world around you, you can create a world for your characters.

So, in this fictional world, somebody is in charge of running things. We humans are tribal. We prefer an overarching power structure leading us because someone has to be the leader. We call that power structure a government.

As a society, the habits we develop, the gods we worship, the things we create and find beautiful, and the foods we eat are evidence of our culture.

If your society is set in modern suburbia, that culture and those values will affect your characters’ view of their world. As you write that first draft, the society will emerge onto the paper.

Maybe you are writing a sci-fi or fantasy novel. You will create the world as you write it. But do make a few notes as you go, or you may have trouble showing your world logically and without contradictions later in the narrative.

If that sounds like outlining, relax. You don’t have to call these notes an outline—after all, we don’t want to imply you aren’t a bona fide “pantser.” You can call them “notes.” No one will accuse you of outlining.

chicken clipartWhat does the outdoor world look and smell like? Is it damp and earthy, or dry and dusty? Is there the odor of fallen leaves moldering in the gutters? Or have we wandered too near the chicken coop? (Eeew … get it off my shoe!) If an author can inject enough sight, sound, and scent into a fantasy or sci-fi setting, the world will feel solid when I read it.

What about the weather? It can be shown in small, subtle ways, a background giving a sense of place to our characters’ interactions and the events they go through.

Once you have decided on your overall climate, consider your level of technology. Perhaps you are setting your story in a pre-industrial society. Do some research now on how the weather affects agriculture and animal husbandry. Bookmark the websites with the best information.

  • Overall, climate limits the variety of food crops that can be grown. Wet and rainy areas will grow vastly different crops from those in arid climates.

Maybe your novel’s setting is a low-tech civilization. If so, the weather will affect your characters differently than one set in a modern society. Also, the level of technology limits what tools and amenities are available to them.

Visualizing the scene and placing yourself there is the best way to make the fantasy world real. Blend what you know about the natural world into it. Consider writing several paragraphs describing all the details that will never make it into your story. Write them on a separate document, a list of things you, as the author, want to have firmly in your mind.

paul cornoyer rainy day in madison square

Paul Cornoyer: Rainy day in Madison Square

In any era, the weather affects the speed with which your characters can travel great distances and how they dress. Bad weather always has a detrimental effect on transportation, offering opportunities for conflict.

Society is the way people live in your world. While writing those first lines on November 1st, details about the society your characters inhabit will surface. They will continue to present themselves throughout the first draft and possibly the second.

Keep notes on the places and people you described. When you get to chapter 30 and need to know what you said in chapter 2, you will have the answer and won’t have to waste time searching the manuscript for it.

How is your society divided? Who has the wealth? Where do your characters fall in that spectrum?

How do we treat each other? Do we have a culture of revenge and aggression?

Who has the power, men or women—or is it a society based on mutual respect? Is there a cisgender bias or an acceptance of different gender identities?

As we said above, someone has to run things. If the politics are a part of your narrative, is the government run by tribal elders, or is it a monarchy, or a democracy, or a dictatorship, or a corporate oligarchy?

How does religion impact your story if it plays a role in your society?

Ferrari_AssetResizeImageWhat about transport? How do people and goods go from one place to another?

Many things about the world will emerge from your creative mind as you write those first pages and will continue to arise throughout the story’s arc.

Consider making a glossary as you go. If you are creating names for people or places, list them separately as they come to you. That way, their spelling won’t drift as the story progresses. It happened to me—the town of Mabry became Maury. I put it on the map as Maury, and it was only in the final proofing that I realized that the spelling of the town in chapter 11 was different from that of chapter 30.

Epic Fails meme2Names and directions might drift and change as you write your first draft. Also, if they’re invented words, consider writing them close to how they are pronounced.

(Sigh.) Some names that looked cool and sword-and-sorcery-like when I first put them on paper in 2007 have lost their charm. It never occurred to me that I would still be writing stories featuring them in 2023.

Oops.

Next up: worldbuilding – creating believable magic and the paranormal.

The #NaNoPrep series to date:

  1. #NaNoPrep: creating the characters #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  2. #NaNoPrep: The initial setting #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  3. #NaNoPrep: What we think the story might be about #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  4. #NaNoPrep: The Heart of the Story #amwriting. | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  5. #NaNoPrep: Signing up and getting started 2023 #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  6. #NaNoPrep: How a strong theme will help you write that novel #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)

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#NaNoPrep: How a strong theme will help you write that novel #amwriting

We’re closing in on November 1st. We’ve done some pre-writing, looking at our characters and the world they inhabit. We may even have jotted down a loose outline of plot points to write to. Today, we’re going a little deeper into what our book may be about.

WritingCraft_NaNoPrep_101When someone asks me what a book I wrote is about, my mind grinds to a halt as I try to decide what to say. I could give them the rundown of the plot, which is the arc of events the characters experience.

Or, I can try to interest them in the characters and the struggles they overcome.

I have discovered that neither of those answers sells books.

I have only just recently discovered that what a prospective reader really wants to know is, “What themes are explored in this book?” People buy books that delve into subjects that resonate with their own lives. They want to read novels that shed light on the human condition, regardless of genre or the setting.

Readers read for the adventure, but the themes explored in that novel stay with them. Strong themes are as memorable as the characters we grow to love.  

plot is the frame upon which the themes of a story are supportedThe story writes itself when I begin with a strong theme and solid characters. A 19th-century writer many have heard of but never read, Henry James has a great deal to tell us about using a story’s themes to create memorable characters. You may be familiar with some of his works, such as The Turn of the Screw and The Golden Bowl. His novels are still being made into movies and adapted as plays.

His novels feature one common theme—lust. Lust for sex. Lust for money. Lust for control.

Lust for power.

The Golden Bowl is a story featuring the themes of deception, manipulation, lust for money, and lust for control. Many of James’s novels are contemporary to his world, featuring characters going through their lives the way they did in his era.

When James sat down to write The Golden Bowl, published in 1904, he knew that the theme, the subject, and the core of the story he intended to write was the overwhelming desire for something unobtainable. Henry James played upon the reader’s secret craving for those same things by taking his characters down to their fundamental emotional components.

His work shocked his contemporary society because he peeled back the veneer of civilization and exposed their motives for the world to see. He created novels pertinent to today’s world by writing the kind of characters he knew in real life and setting them in stories that featured themes everyone could recognize and relate to in either a good or bad way.

So now, let’s look at the themes in a novel that has become a foundation book of modern fantasy. The Hobbit, by J.R.R. Tolkien, was published in 1937 as a children’s book. (Apparently, children were better educated in those days.) Courage in the face of failure and personal redemption are unifying themes of the Lord of the Rings series, along with loyalty and honor.

the hobbitWhen Bilbo Baggins fights the giant spiders, he also faces his own cowardice and is amazed that he could do such a thing. This is only the first step in his personal arc. As the story progresses, he discovers that he has courage, which has nothing to do with the invisibility conferred on him by the ring he found earlier. Bilbo has courage, and yes, he is afraid. But he is not afraid to be courageous.

In the “Two Towers” Boromir must also have the courage to face his dishonor, move beyond his attempted theft of the ring, and find the courage to admit his shame. He then fights to protect Merry and Pippin. This is his personal redemption.

So, we know that theme illustrates a story’s central ideas. But maybe we don’t have a clue as to what theme might unify the events of our story arc.

Romantic love is a defining feature of the genre of Romance. But what different aspects of love can be found in every genre, from fantasy to sci-fi, horror, or crime fiction?

  • Brother/Sisterly love
  • Dangerous Attraction
  • Friendship
  • Love gained
  • Love lost
  • Parental love
  • Passion
  • Selfish love
  • Tragic love

Quill_pen smallLove is only one theme, yet it has so many facets. Other themes abound, large central concepts that build tension within the narrative.

Here is a brief list, just a small jumping-off point for your creative mind. Some are significant themes that entire genres have been built around, and others are good supporting themes:

  • Abuse
  • Alienation/loneliness
  • Ambition
  • Coming of age
  • Conspiracy
  • Crime and Justice
  • Fall from Grace
  • Good vs. Evil
  • Grief
  • Humanity in jeopardy
  • Midlife crisis
  • Nostalgia for the good old days
  • Plagues
  • Rebellion and revolution
  • Redemption
  • Religious intolerance
  • Separation and reunion
  • The fall of civilization
  • The hero’s journey
  • War

theme_meme_lirf06302020Sometimes, we can visualize a complex theme but can’t explain it. If we can’t explain it, how do we show it? Consider the theme of “grief.” It is a common theme that can play out against any backdrop, whether sci-fi or reality based, where humans interact on an emotional level.

A plan is not always required because, in some stories, the flash of inspiration we start with is a strong theme. The theme develops as you write, and immediately, you see what it is. In my case, I need a plan fifty percent of the time.

Whatever the case, once I have identified the main theme, the story begins to take shape in my head. I can show it through

  • Actions
  • Symbolic settings/places
  • Allegorical objects in the setting
  • Conversations

On the surface level, each literary genre looks widely different. But when we go deeper, we find that all literary genres have commonalities: protagonists and side characters who must deal with and react to the book’s underlying themes.

Next up: creating societies, science, magic, and the paranormal.

The #NaNoPrep series to date:

  1. #NaNoPrep: creating the characters #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  2. #NaNoPrep: The initial setting #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  3. #NaNoPrep: What we think the story might be about #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  4. #NaNoPrep: The Heart of the Story #amwriting. | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)
  5. #NaNoPrep: Signing up and getting started 2023 #amwriting | Life in the Realm of Fantasy (conniejjasperson.com)

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